Sorrowful Serenity
A heart burst with a big bang,
Shrink then shrank,
As all their voices in my head sang,
But all the disaster remained silent,
My cries couldn’t travel through the vacuum,
Stillness of my space and my mind running throughout this race could never equivalent
when matter avenged to be rogue,
You became sinister gravity
I orbited you like how a planet orbits a black hole
Painfully forced to obey dominance
Told me my star had no significance
A heart bursted with a Big Bang
A heart bursted with a Big Bang when it could hold no more.
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Vidushi Pandey
13-year-old student currently studying in the 9th grade at Delhi Public School Sushant Alok. Vidushi has displayed a keen interest in science and public speaking, which she has been actively pursuing. Additionally, she has a deep passion for literature and enjoys discovering new books to read. She also finds writing as a medium to express herself creatively.
How aptly young Vidushi has captured the feeling of anxiety. She has given voice to a voice which usually remains unheard by others
Captivating and beautiful poem from a 13 year old . Great depth in the words she has chosen .Great talent
Such an intense and thoughtful poem.way to go Vidushi.
Very well captured in heartfelt words!
Great work Vidushi!! You really captured your pain very well. Only few can do that. You linked your pain to space/ science, great work! No one can stop you dear!! Definitely there is no limit for your success, because you are connected to the space at 13 yrs of old. Hats off.
But i want to give you few hints (not at all advise):
1) Check whether the disaster remained silent or it’s you who is in silence.
2) As we all knew that none of the mass can travel through vacuum.
So, your soul have to be weightless from all your pains. So that it’s easy to raise your voice for what you want.
3) Nothing can escape from Black hole due to it’s strong gravity. But remember it’s nothing but an empty space. Also 700 years pass by in 1 min. on edge of Black Hole. So be careful, please don’t waste your precious Earth’s time by revolving around the Black hole, because it’s empty.
All the best dear.
Vidushi , so happy for you .
More power to the young author.
There is an implosion in the heart, a pull of gravity that keeps her low. But she has found her own defence mechanism, her healing process. Nothing is more potent than a person willing to heal herself. The idea is to express, through whatever channel, to be true to yourself. It is an act of courage. Be proud of it, never repress your emotions and teach the world how to live, for the whole world suffers in one way or the other. 👍